[HP – Harry/Draco] moonlitdark – With A Certain Charm

Title: With A Certain Charm
Author: moonlitdark
Rating: NC-17 || Status: Complete
Summary: Draco is content with his life. He has a beautiful hotel to run and a new family to care for, but the arrival of an unexpected guest disturbs his orderly existence.

With A Certain Charm

I really like this fic, for the most part. The characterization of Harry and Draco are pretty awesome. I liked that Draco has grown so much, and that Harry has learned to be confident in the limelight. It’s definitely refreshing from how we normally see him shying away from the press.

I loved how Harry and Draco are just drawn together. The pacing of it is great. I can understand Harry wanting to use Draco in the beginning of their relationship, but at the same time, it was pretty insulting. (I would probably beat him over if anyone said something like that to me, lol.)

The scene when Draco bottoms for the first time was pretty good. I liked all of Draco’s internal conflicts, and his eventually pushing it aside. And, of course, there was this:

“That was… you were amazing,” Potter whispered, his exhales ruffling the hair on Draco’s forehead.

“I was,” Draco agreed, and drifted off to sleep with the sound of Potter’s quiet laughter ringing in his ears.

Oh Draco, so cute, haha.

But yeah, my heart just kind of broke for Draco when he decided to go to Harry’s campaign rally. Seriously Harry, why such a jerk?!

I didn’t like how Harry justified himself to Draco at the end. I just have problems with cheating, even if it’s “fake” cheating. I hate it when you watch TV and you see it and I hate it when you read it and you see it. I mean, don’t get me wrong, I want Harry and Draco to get together at the end (and similarly, sometimes on TV, I still want them to get back together and stuff), but it still annoys me. But I guess that’s the difference between fiction and real life — in real life, I would never let anything like that slide, but in stories, you want your OTP to survive, haha.

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